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Post by MarineWarrior on May 29, 2003 9:06:29 GMT -5
DARKNESS FALLS
As darkness falls and the land is dark.
The night wields her power threatiningly.(sp)
The trees bend and the wind blows.
And the ghostly light of the moon glows.
Crickets chirp and a wolf howls
The terror moves in your bowels.
It frightens,scares,thrills and chills
You run for your life not knowing what from
but all children do it's part of growing up.
To be scared is natural that's what they say
But you know to stay in the light
If you want to see another day.
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Post by Nemesi on May 29, 2003 9:12:50 GMT -5
That's great MarineWarrior. Hope you post some more. You've reminded me of the old days when I used to write poetry. I guess I lost that part of me somewhere.
btw - threateningly
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Post by MarineWarrior on May 29, 2003 9:15:25 GMT -5
Thanx for the spelling help. Iused to be smart but I joined the Marines and my brain died. HAHAHAHAHAHA ;D Thanx for the kind words too. If I can think of anymore I will post .
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Post by Warlord on May 29, 2003 9:16:05 GMT -5
Nice job -- captures the environment pretty well.  |
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Post by MarineWarrior on May 29, 2003 9:37:58 GMT -5
A Haiku by me...MarineWarrior
The Green Grass of Home
It Sways Gently In the Breeze
I Long For It Now.
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Post by Warlord on May 29, 2003 9:41:42 GMT -5
That's good as well. Puts nostalgia into it. ;D |
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Post by TemperaryUserName on May 29, 2003 12:34:31 GMT -5
Pretty nice. The Haiku is awesome as well. I've written some weird ones in school.
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Post by Yanden on May 29, 2003 19:41:05 GMT -5
Very nice indeed. ;D
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Post by MarineWarrior on May 30, 2003 10:19:48 GMT -5
The Rage Inside Me
It's Builds Inside More And More
I Will Detonate
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Post by theeldergodofice on Jun 3, 2003 17:12:27 GMT -5
 Nice
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Post by Nemesi on Jun 4, 2003 2:53:41 GMT -5
The haiku's a great, man. Keep 'em coming! ;D
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Post by Khali on Jun 5, 2003 4:49:44 GMT -5
not bad Marine.  |
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Post by MarineWarrior on Jun 5, 2003 12:00:32 GMT -5
Kahli I take that complement very highly. Thank you very much.
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Post by CageSunnies on Jun 6, 2003 3:58:39 GMT -5
Wow!
That's awesome! Very nice!
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Post by MarineWarrior on Jun 6, 2003 10:04:38 GMT -5
Here are more.
"Unknown Soldier"
The war is over.
I have been tossed aside now.
Just like common trash.
"Beauty"
Beauty is within.
Not from outward apperance.
Judge me from within.
"Life"
My life is a fake.
I am destined for better.
This life is a lie.
"Rose"
A token of love.
Can it be thought of as more?
Or taken as less.
"Freedom"
I am free for now.
Is it real, or is it not.
I now cannot tell.
"Distortion"
Up has become down.
The world is in a tailspin.
Where do we go now?
"The Artist"
He gazes at it.
Wonders if it was enough.
Smiling, he decides.
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