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Post by theeldergodofice on Jun 10, 2003 9:39:42 GMT -5
Here I will be posting the songs I write. I will try to get them in today. Only I can post song lyrics in here. unles yanden says so!
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Post by theeldergodofice on Jun 10, 2003 10:43:18 GMT -5
"Livin The Life Of A Soldier"--I dedicate this song to all soldiers and people overseas
One time ago,
You never thought I'd ever be a soldier...
You Never thought I'd ever be a man.
But, Now look at me,
Man I am in the army.
And I am livin the life of a soldier,
You never thought I could do it...
But, I am...
Livin the life of a soldier,
It isn't as bad as I though.
One time ago,
You never thought I'd ever be a man,
But, now look at me,
I'm livin the life of a soldier.
It's not as bad as I thought.
I am,
Livin the life of a soldier,
I'm livin the life of a man,
And it isn't as bad as anyone...
thought.
I am livin the life of a soldier,
I am a man.
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Well, it isn't as good as I thought it would be because I lost my original lyrics and I had to remake it. I give myself 3 1/2 out of 5.
I'll be posting another song later!
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Post by TemperaryUserName on Jun 10, 2003 13:09:24 GMT -5
It has a nice patriotic feel. Good emmotional touches. Nice.  |
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Post by theeldergodofice on Jun 10, 2003 13:10:10 GMT -5
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Post by CageSunnies on Jun 20, 2003 22:14:53 GMT -5
Great!
You should see the 'Avril Lavigne - Complicated' Parody I posted.
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Post by theeldergodofice on Jun 20, 2003 22:26:35 GMT -5
Another Song! "Why Can't you Stay" Oh, do ya really gotta go, ya know know you really need to know, that I fell in love with you. why can't you stay, why do ya gotta go away, 'cause I fell in love with you, oh, why can't you stay a bit longer, why can't you stay forever, cause I fell in love with you. can't you stay, oh, can't you stay I think i fell in love, with you -------- It's kinda got a country/rock mix and I wrote it for a girl who moved away.  |
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